Together Forever

Poem on the spot =]

Amazing times, we have had

Some were good, some where bad

I look around, nothing has changed

Most everything, has stayed the same

in the future, will we be here?

as friends so close, together and near

Ill never forget, our memories

together forever, is what we'll be!

 

Reviews

[Silere]

Nice flow.. with plenty of emotions.. great promise of friendship poem. Good Job! Thank you for sharing

[Vampire]

Great poem but change "Where" to "were". Besides that good poem. I hoped this comment helped :)

[Mitji]

I must agree completely with Wildecat! This is completely beautiful poem and I love it!

[Wildecat]

This is absolutely beautiful, thanks for sharing.