Need vs Want

Need vs Want

A Poem by Lively
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Today, humans are forgetting the difference between Need and Want. The poem is to make understand the difference.

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Soft drinks are want,
water is need.
Want junk to taste,
need food to feed.

Want forts to stay,
need huts to live.
Want uniform to dress,
need clothes to protect.

Success is want,
learning from failures is need.
Shrewdness is want,
truthfulness is need.

It's high time to differ between need and want
to stop living idly
and start living ideally.
for we have forgotten in sake of want of us and ours
need of others.
For we have forgotten for the sake of our luxuries 
all our responsibilities.

Remember!
Wants destroy the life
and needs portray the life.......

© 2011 Lively


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Your wisdom is true in this poem. People who want everything at any cost. End up alone and sad. A wise man know kindness, being honest and doing the right things will lead you to a good place. I like the many strong examples in this poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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..wOOw.. that was quite a thought combined together nicely....

Last lines were just cheery on the Cake... Loved them the most :)
^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like it it is really good! please comment on my poems thx
Vb

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is marvelous. The idea of it matched with the strength behind every single line is just.... I can't describe, in words how much I love this poem! Touché.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice poem, I like your thoughts about needs and wants that we always have to choose.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is really good you really showed the difference!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The last verse really brings the whole piece together. This speaks volumes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great
i loved this and for me i knew why my life is falling i take my wants and i ignore my needs ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome poem...i really really liked it a lot..
this poem makes me think about bad habits...like fast food..
i always liked it..now i will try to reduce it as much as i can..
thanks for sharing it with me...
keep writing the good work:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I agree that people have gotten so spoiled and they seem to have forgotten the difference between needs and wants, completely. Great work!! I especially like the lines,
"to stop living idly
and start living ideally."
:) Good job,

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh yeah! your wisdom shines through in this poem. I shall take care the next time around. I promise.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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