Life Is A Prison

Life Is A Prison

A Poem by Chloe Christine
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It's about nothing really. Just life. From experience. Written at 3:21 a.m. :) Enjoy? Review. Ohh. and this was ispired by a good poet-Puff-and their poem also titled Life Is A Prison.

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.Life Is A Prison.

 Life with the bars,

The Restriction in place.

And everyone gone,

Not One smiling face.

 

If you set Expectations

You'll just be let down.

So forget it all

And get used to a Frown.

 

If you wish for a Rainbow,

All you'll get is the Rain.

It's sadness that comes

Not a single gain.

 

So how do you live

With so much Loath?

You hide it inside,

But beware-it Explodes.

 

You are a time Bomb.

With sadness risen.

What can you say..

This life is a Prison?.

© 2009 Chloe Christine


Author's Note

Chloe Christine
Please ignore the grammar part. Didn't go over it. Review the POEM part please?

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Well my grammar sucks so i notced nothing but the words.
And well i like it. My fave line was
" If you wish for a Rainbow,

All you'll get is the Rain. "

Something about it, i'm not sure what but i loved that.
I see more the mind as a prison and like is the court yard.
But yeah thats just me.
Loved this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow. You are a very talented writer!
I can relate to this. You're right too, sometimes if you set expectations all that happens is you get let down.
Also that if you keep things hidden inside you are like a bomb [ i love how you related that ]. Everything continues to add on and build until you cant take it anymore and you explode.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like your work, well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very nice! Short and sweet and to the point.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this one alot it is relivint at one piont or another in everyones life

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thnks guys. I love it too. It's just one of the many poems I've written about stuff like this. As well my favorite line is -If you wish for a rainbow, All you'll get is the rain.-
I just feel like thats how it is.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this
I can feel this, very well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well my grammar sucks so i notced nothing but the words.
And well i like it. My fave line was
" If you wish for a Rainbow,

All you'll get is the Rain. "

Something about it, i'm not sure what but i loved that.
I see more the mind as a prison and like is the court yard.
But yeah thats just me.
Loved this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 18, 2009
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Chloe Christine
Chloe Christine

Kansas, MO



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Alright, so I'm Chloe. Middle name is Christine, and I love it. I'm 15 and I write constantly. I'm kinda in love with my boyfriend, Nathan. We've been together for a year and a half. I write about him.. more..

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