I Wouldn't Mind

I Wouldn't Mind

A Poem by LivingDeath
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Lyrics that wont get finished, for something that probably won't happen. A hope I saw that died as fast as it was born.. fml.. Why do all good things, always have to break you?

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Verses 1+2~[rapped]

Start it off slow
(yeah) Let the music vibe,
Think of all the times
That we'd have to run and hide,
If tomorrow was a mystery
We'd let the moment ride, (yeah)
Take all of the seconds
That these hours could provide;
I'd praise the higher powers
For an angel so divine,
But how could I be worthy
With the sins that I confide,
With the scars that I must hide
You are whole when I'm untied,
You came into my life
Like a spark-
          -Our hearts collide.
(yeah)
He is we-
          -And we are free
To seize a life we never breathed,
Like dancing in the mirror
Yet our strife would-
             -Always make us bleed,
Make us leave-
          -When we would freeze
But all that pain is history,
Tomorrows never written
It's our choice-
          -To make a destiny,
But don't believe-
          -You're less to me
From all the times we couldn't be,
Today is what we make it
And I'm trying to make a memory,
It's you I want-
          -Yeah can't you see
Take my hand lets dance the beat,
Our moments in the rhythm
Wont you be the beauty-

          -To my beast.

~CHORUS~ [sung]
(yeah)
I wouldn't mind
If we layed here all alone,
1 heart for-
     -My 2 queens-
          -Just need 3 words
For a family,
(yeah)
I wouldn't mind
If we layed here on the phone,
Still 1 heart-
     -For my 2 queens-
          -Just need 3 words
For a family..

... :/ maybe one day ill finish this.. fingers crossed..
..but we'll see..


© 2015 LivingDeath



Author's Note

LivingDeath
Listen with this beat

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Hmm...impressive...I like it!! I would help you out considering I'm also a song writer but I can't seem to string together words like you can...I hope you finish it someday!! It's REALLY good...


Posted 1 Year Ago


Is this I wouldn't mind by He is we ? X) I liked your song , it's beautiful .

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, " -When we would freeze
But all that pain is history,
Tomorrows never written
It's our choice-"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 2 Years Ago


If tomorrow was a mystery
We'd let the moment ride, (yeah)
Take all of the seconds
That these hours could provide;

LOVE this lyric

Posted 2 Years Ago


I get the rhythm of a rap song, even though I am older than the youth of today. Nice, flowing write. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very nice use of words. I felt the song and the need. Hard to write song. You did very well. Thank you for sharing the excellent song and poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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