Stardust

Stardust

A Poem by LivingDeath
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Inspired by the picture, embodied by emotion.

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She's got a heart
Of stardust galaxies
A part just like
Dark fallacies;
Reveries - I can't believe
It wont conceive
A hope to breed;
With marks that bleed
I won't concede
Embark my part,
My serenity.


© 2016 LivingDeath



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Very nice piece. I like the rhythm and the flow of it.

Posted 13 Hours Ago


Beautiful; galloping within your lines for an exquisite tease and peaceful seduction. Adore the flow

Posted 8 Months Ago


Beautiful artwork and amazing description. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


Words after my own heart... Love this! Your rhyme here is beautiful.

Posted 10 Months Ago


I can see where the picture inspired this write. You have a lot of good rhyming. Valentine

Posted 10 Months Ago


Reads almost like song lyrics from some psychedelic rock album. Think Porcupine Tree meets Tool.

Posted 10 Months Ago



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Added on December 12, 2016
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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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