R.I.P Daniel

R.I.P Daniel

A Poem by LivingDeath
"

To my moms best friend, my second mom, my bestest friend. May your soul rest in peace.

"

 The black glass

on the lonesome bridge

took another life.

 

A life I loved 

for all my life

and to this bitter day.

 

My mom, my aunt, my sister

my friend

she was closer then all.

 

Spun out of control 

into the other lane

a semi that couldn't stop.

 

My heart skipped a beat 

when her heart stopped that day

on that lonesome bridge.

 

Her open arms would take me in

with every time she saw me

I couldn't help but smile.

 

Now shes gone

a voice in the wind

a memory in my heart.

 

The black glass 

on the lonesome bridge 

has taken the life from me.

© 2009 LivingDeath


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wow this poem is amazing ...... good write

Posted 14 Years Ago


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So sad! Very captivating and your emotions are raw in this piece. This poem was great! Even if it was sad. Great poem! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem is so heartfelt ... I got tears in my eyes while reading it. It feels wrong to say that this is a nice poem, but it is. It is written with love, more than grief.
I'm sorry for you loss, for what you had to go through to write this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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almost but what if its like no one was ever taken from me but its like my life is just to fucked up that i'd be better off dead not like anyone pays attention sorry bout ur sister and her and whoeverelse sorry i havent seen u in a while but just think the now have a great life of love with eachother above the sky in heaven .

luv ya
abbigale j. mann

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is beautiful. Such a tragedy, but so much beauty along the way. Pain is clearly felt here, but made so beautiful that it takes away a bit of the sting. I can imagine a bridge covered with ice, bloodied by death. You don't write simply about loss here, because there are so many other emotions felt as well while reading. I really enjoyed this.

I'm very sorry for your loss.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A heartfelt and emotionl write. So sorry for your lose, even though we all know that words don't change a thing, I truly am. This is an amazing poem and I think it is one of your best because you really can feel your pain. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is a sad, but very good poem. Thank you so much for sharing. This was very deep man. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I'm sorry for your lost. Life is a pain sometime. A sad poem.
Coyote

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LivingDeath

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