Inspiration

Inspiration

A Poem by LivingDeath
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Ever feel a little down, need something to help you up.

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 Why do we fall if we don't know how to get back up. We fall so we can get the power and the strength to help us get back onto our feet, to climb over the obstacles in our way. We may fall one hundred times before we are able to get to our feet again, but we will never quit. Never give up. Because if we just give up, are we ever going to get back onto our feet? No. So we will fail one hundred times before we quit and then we will try some more till we are standing on our feet again. There is no way around life's cruel pain but misery is our choice; our decision. We can choose not to let misery pull us into the darkness where pain and suffering linger and we can stand tall and choose to stay on our feet till time knocks us down. So why do we fall? We fall so we can learn to stand. Never give up, It's up to you to get to your feet. Are you going to be able to? Will you have the strength?

© 2009 LivingDeath


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LivingDeath
Never give up

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Not to (purposely) be a b***h, but maybe you should take your own advice, hmm?
One who hurts themself over emotional pain is weak. Those who brave the pain and strive to make it through are strong. Be strong, for me, for Christina, and re-read this rant you've written, and be sure to smile every now and then.

~Blessed Be

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like how it makes you think.

Posted 14 Years Ago


woah. thanks :) i'm so down and miserable now and this was just really super inspiring. I do like how you end with a question, forcing the reader to think about it whether they want to or not. nice job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this. It made me think. You are very right in saying that misery is our choice whether we let it pull us into the darkness where pain and suffering lie. This gives me a whole new outlook on certain things. Sometimes though, pain finds you, and suffering is a result of pain. Sometimes, you can't help it. Especially if it's in your thoughts. Nice poem though.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 11, 2009

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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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