I Cannot Fly

I Cannot Fly

A Poem by LivingDeath

I cannot fly with mangled wings

I cannot live from broken dreams,

I cannot see through tainted eyes

I cannot love through twisted lies.


© 2010 LivingDeath



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You left me in awe after reading this man.
Awesome!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


good job! short but powerfull

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it, very much so. It reminds me of so many moments in my life. Very well written, thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short and to the point and sometimes that is what makes a great poem. Strong meaning in only a few words. Nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This is so amazing! Really simple, but it could tell a whole life story. Really great written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short, meaningful and powerful. Each line was profound. Another great write!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow, I agree with Gregory. This is short, but it packs a HUGE punch. It kind of makes me just want to sit down and think of all the different ways I can associate it to so many different things. But I won't, because I need to comment.
This is so profound. I think this should be put in liquid form and dropped into the water of every country... so that maybe world leaders and other sometimes heartless individuals might gain some insight into human nature and how it is to simply -be- human, and how it is to want to live but not be able to.
Great write! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short...but thought provoking and very true...Very good write...

10/10

As Always,
Gregory

Posted 7 Years Ago


one simmple word
BEAUTIFULL!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short but strong! I like it...

Posted 7 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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