I Cannot Fly

I cannot fly with mangled wings

I cannot live from broken dreams,

I cannot see through tainted eyes

I cannot love through twisted lies.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

You left me in awe after reading this man.
Awesome!!

[Fallen Angel]

good job! short but powerfull

[Alex]

I like it, very much so. It reminds me of so many moments in my life. Very well written, thank you.

[Theresa]

Short and to the point and sometimes that is what makes a great poem. Strong meaning in only a few words. Nicely done.

[Ejdrup]

This is so amazing! Really simple, but it could tell a whole life story. Really great written!

[Blue tailed kite]

Short, meaningful and powerful. Each line was profound. Another great write!!

[Aimee Mahathy]

Wow, I agree with Gregory. This is short, but it packs a HUGE punch. It kind of makes me just want to sit down and think of all the different ways I can associate it to so many different things. But I won't, because I need to comment.
This is so profound. I think this should be put in liquid form and dropped into the water of every country... so that maybe world leaders and other sometimes heartless individuals might gain some insight into human nature and how it is to simply -be- human, and how it is to want to live but not be able to.
Great write! :D

[Gregory H.]

Short...but thought provoking and very true...Very good write...

10/10

As Always,
Gregory

[AbbigaleJordan]

one simmple word
BEAUTIFULL!!!!!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Short but strong! I like it...