Psycho

I'M NOT CRAZY xD

I stare into the darkness

insomnia kicking in,

demons in the shadows

watching my everymove.

 

Forever to be paranoid

of the hands that grab my thoughts,

eyes that look down upon me

from dark corners of my world.

 

Voices echo in my head

voices not of mine,

screaming at me every night

telling me to end my life.

 

Shadows push me to my knees

hands pulling me further down,

hands that come up through the ground

from the darkest pits of hell.

 

I stare into the darkness

insomnia kicking in,

demons in the shadows

watching my everymove.

Reviews

[Last.Words.Linger]

i felt every word flow through me

[Princy]

do u have any idea about the fact... that u just gave me goosebumps?? O_o

=P

lolzz

but seriously.... u grasped the madness really well.
n ya u aint crazy, I write bizarre stuff like these, jus didnt post it here then ppl might go, Holy wtf or something.
n lastly... it rocked!! m/

[Alex]

Second poem I read from you that has the same beginning and ending. I like the first verse, o though I think it works best as a closing rather than a start.... Overall, good poem.

[A]

This was definitely eerie and kind of creepy...but in a good way. Very captivating. I love the imagery and the descriptions you put into this piece. I could picture it perfectly. Very well written...great poem! :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I can relate. It reminds me of a whole bunch disorders. My friend is still trying to figure out what I have. They think it is manic depression.

[Fallen Angel]

i love this, can totally relate to this..keep on writing*

[FireFly15]

This is amazing. So dark and alluring. Its like when you begin to read it you cant and dont want to stop. Once again, wonderful write.

[Theresa]

You're not crazy and as you can see so many people can relate to this as can I. There is something about night that always has my mind working in over drive. All my fears suddenly seem to manifest into one horrible feeling. Your poem reminds me of this. It's a great piece. It is written and flows really well. Great job.

[Kayla_May]

wow

[AbbigaleJordan]

its good great come back