Seeing Through Blind Eyes

Seeing Through Blind Eyes

A Poem by LivingDeath
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I didn't know who was talking to me at first until I read her poems and bio. It was the one who I'v been missing and loving with my whole heart.

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Today I saw 
how blind I am,
when you stood right there
and I moved no hand.

Your words were clear 
but I did not see,
that it was you 
just wanting me.

Then my eyes were opened
and I saw it was you,
my tears poured out
my heart broke new. 

I keep trying, and trying and trying
to hear your sweet soft voice,
but two people deny
our whole hearted choice.

I will come back
to see your face,
in the spot we met
remember the place?

© 2010 LivingDeath


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another poem of longing....i hope your muse meets you at your favorite place to inspire you with joy instead of lack

Posted 13 Years Ago


Like I say with all your writing. It is very well written. I enjoyed reading all of your work so far this was my second favorite of yours so far. KEEP IT UP!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very sweet~
It flowed nicely and the rhyme was just lovely :3


Posted 13 Years Ago


aww. this is really sweet. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is sweet and very touching, good luck!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this, its so sweet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice piece, I do agree with some about it being a cut little short, But still I really enjoyed it =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful and well written. I enjoyed the message behind it, nice work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


A powerful poem. I felt the disappointment and desire strongly in your words. I like the ending. A possibility. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


WOW Love this poem. It's really got more than one meaning... I think i'll have to reread it before I go to try and pick it apart some more... 10/10

Posted 14 Years Ago



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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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