Christina Maria

Christina Maria

A Poem by LivingDeath

Don't get rid of your necklace
don't throw your ring away,
I might not be there now
but I'll be back for you one day.

Keep my heart close by
for it will always remain yours,
when I come sweep you off your feet
we can walk the ocean shores.

I still remember all we shared
with the memories and the moments,
from waking in your little bed
to all our sarcastic comments.

And when we first met 
the excuses we made,
to hold each others hand
our smiles wouldn't fade. 

Underneath those concrete steps
I asked you to be mine,
my life started then 
you made my smile shine.

You made my life worth living
you made me truly smile,
I still love you with all my heart
though we're separated by these miles.

I still remember the spot we found
where we spent every weekday lunch,
right beside the gymnasium doors 
I miss those times so much.

Moments come and go like that
but our memories will remain,
I'll be back for you one day
and we'll make more memories again.

© 2010 LivingDeath



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This is really powerful. You have a lot of powerful feelings, and you did a good job of expressing them.

Posted 7 Years Ago


so sweet, so beautiful, so precious and embrace every moment before things go away but in your mind, and heart always stay.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is too beautiful. Emotion just pours off the page. Keep true to yourself, she is one lucky young lady.

Posted 7 Years Ago


wow this is really sweet and powerful and your love shows endlessly...truely a great piece of writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aww, this is a very sweet tribute to the one you love so much! The honesty in this is breathtaking~
Though, I think the line "when I come sweep you off your feet" would flow better as "when I come to sweep you off your feet". But, that's just my thought, dismiss it if you want~ :3
This is a wonderful poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is such a sweet poem. The affection and what this person means to you, oozes through the lines. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


sweet =]

Posted 7 Years Ago


Who ever you seem to be writing about in your poems is a very lucky person. I hope they know how much they mean to you. You have such hope and passion in your words. I hope your relationship lasts way beyond the distance between you two! You have great work, keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is very very good. i really dont like reading long poems like this, but when i started i couldnt stop. this is filled with honesty, image, and hope. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


There is such an honest passion to your words, living in a hope of what may be flowing from the light of what was. Wonderful piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

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