Is Love A Lie?

I felt your lips 

upon my neck

and felt your warm embrace.

I thought if love

was really there

or if it was all a lie.

For it wouldn't be the first time

you played me on like this,

but it wouldn't be the last time

that I'd fall for it.

Reviews

[Liz Alexander]

;) Good Job. It a question everyone asks

[Walkingblind]

once again the blind emotion leads us on, very nice.

[Scarlet Pulse]

Very interesting word play. I really enjoyed this poem very much. A great short poem!

[Blue]

Ha! Good write... Really something there I'll say... =)

[Erin_is_peace]

I say don't give up on love because you never know when you'll find that perfect person!

[Katie]

I love the ending especially. Very short & to the point- yet not lacking any substance. Great job!

[not your typical girl]

very short, very nice. i love the feeling of on-going love in the midst of doubt. i don't know how u did that but it was truly great. the last stanza was just great.. acceptance of foolishness of love. the decision to go through with it all over again, knowing that you could get hurt.
good job!!! keep it up!
NYTG

[dancing fish]

Very cool poem. Brings up the question, is love here physical of emotional? The subject seems to be searching for emotional love but willing to take it as just a physical act. Is that enough? and if not, is is worth the cost? so much in such a short poem. Great!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Happens so many times. Very nice flow and poem too.. sad , well written.

Chloe

[Zombeh]

Thought-provoking viewpoint that you have here. I like the last stanza -- it reminds me of many people who have fallen for things like this. Great job, made me think as well ;]