Read This If You're Hurt

Read This If You're Hurt

A Poem by LivingDeath
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if anyone else reading this is going through a tough time in their life and need someone to talk to, leave me a message and I'll help as best I can.

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If no one else will listen

when all thats left is tears,

when you find it's hard to live

you know I'll still be here.

 

To hold you when you're down

and listen when you speak,

to make you strong again

when you're feeling weak.

 

If someone took your dreams

and broke your heart in two,

I'll bring my string and needles

and fix it till it's new.

 

I'll be here till the end

when theres no light left in days,

if you think you can't go on

I know we'll find our ways.

 

You don't deserve the s**t

when I know you're made of gold,

you can have my jacket

if your life is feeling cold.

 

None of us are angels

but we don't have to live in hell,

I'll help you to your feet

if you've ever fell.

 

If no one else will listen

when all thats left is tears,

when you find it's hard to live

you know I'll still be here.

 

I love you.

 

© 2011 LivingDeath


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Hey thanks for inviting me to join the butterfly project. I really liked this write, and i'm glad you're such a kind and helpful person. thank you

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice poem, well written, made me cry, sorry im emotional.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is amazaing.
i cried.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tyler,
This poem is amazing. Really, it is. It's so sweet! I'm sure this person appreciates it a lot!

"To hold you when you're down
and listen when you speak,
to make you strong again
when you're feeling weak.
 
If someone took your dreams
and broke your heart in two,
I'll bring my string and needles
and fix it till it's new."

Those two stanzas were my favorite. But the whole thing was great. Thanks for sharing!


Posted 12 Years Ago


I absolutely love this. Wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem... filled with strong emotions... caring and love..
I love it.
Thank you so much for sharing!!

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 12 Years Ago


I've written like this before, unfortunately to someone who didn't appreciate it. It's an admirable sentiment. I hope you are rewarded with friends and loved ones who will return the favor. Very nice poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


omg. thats soo sweet. im gonna think of that every time i get sad. i luv u 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that made my day... :) thanks

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a sweet and caring poem! Everybody needs some comfort, nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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