Hate-Love

OOO! SO SEXY :D I turned myself on while writing this...but basically this is what goes on with me & Don...if we're in bed, we love each other, but in rl we're sort of awkward enemies. Enjoy the steamyness =]

See this desire burning in my eyes,

The lust that makes me forget all your lies.

When your hand creeps up my thigh,

I lean my head back: I feel so high!

 

It doesn’t matter that we hate each other,

As long as we both know how to pleasure the other.

And as long as you keep making my heartbeat flutter,

I’ll go straight from ice into warm, melted butter.

 

The next day, we’ll glare at each other if we meet,

But for now these tingling feelings are so sweet,

When you manage to get me between the sheets,

All the hard feelings burn up in the heat!

Reviews

[MandarinOranges]

I know exactly how this works!! lol But I don't think I could have described it nearly as well as you did here. Good job!

[melancholia skies]

Indeed. This is an interesting piece. Perhaps it'll may pass the other submissions, if there was anymore. LOL. Nicely written. =)

[ShanZ-Turn]

This was great, made me laugh, while still sending across the "steam" of both passion and hate, in a very playful way

[Tina Kline]

This is really good and I enjoyed reading it. It is playful yet realistic at the same time. I like to read romance novels and your poem is so much like the plot in so many of them! The love/hate thing that goes on! You captured it all in your poem! Great!

Tina

[Seriana]

*Giggles* you're so funny Lizz! That was great. Nothing like a little ditty to get your heart-rate up, huh? I like the playfulness you brought to this piece. And it was nice and concise. Great job girl!