She

She

A Poem by Brian Lockard
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nature

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Real beauty cannot be seen

It cannot be felt nor touched

Real beauty is experienced

It is experienced under the glistening sun,

or the glow of the moon,

Her breathing envelopes you,

A gust of wind,

Powerful and subtle

She is inside of you,

And you inside of her

But there is fear, uncertainty

She is gone when you can see

And alive when you are blind

"It is only me"

The voice is familiar, yet foreign

Muffled, as if from a dream

You pray that it is real,

And that you are rewarded for your courage

She cannot hold you for long,

She is a fickle lover,

and has many suitors,

To taste of her,

Is to taste of the universe

Her love is absolute,

And to experience the release,

The ecstasy, you must promise her one thing,

That when you are free,

You remember her for eternity


© 2017 Brian Lockard



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Real beauty cannot be seen
It cannot be felt nor touched
Real beauty is experienced

Its very beautifully done :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


This could be referring to so much and I love that. I gets your personal point across but it also leaves room for interpretation and personal connection for the readers.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Beautiful words....enjoyed :) x

Posted 6 Months Ago


A beautiful poem expressing about SHE! I loved the flow of the poem.

Posted 6 Months Ago


it is one of the best poems written about woman...it is wonderful beautifully written...

Posted 7 Months Ago


Brian Lockard

7 Months Ago

This made my day..Thank you

-Brian
Beautiful, gentle and good words shared.
"And to experience the release,
The ecstasy, you must promise her one thing,
That when you are free,
You remember her for eternity"
I agree with the above lines. Complete poem was very good. Thank you Brian for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


Aloha Brian, a fragrant read :) I am always inspired by my surroundings by delicate flying and flowering things. This is beautiful. Izzy

Posted 7 Months Ago


Love nature poems! This is so brilliantly written. Well done

Posted 7 Months Ago



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Added on April 12, 2017
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Brian Lockard
Brian Lockard

Chicago, IL



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