Miss you

Miss you

A Poem by Raas

Like the moon lovers miss the night,
When the sun shines
And the day lovers miss the bright, 
During the moonlights

You miss him and
I miss you

Like the snow lovers miss the winter,
When the rain water drops
And the rain lovers miss the thunders,
When the summer smiles around

You miss him and
I miss you

Like the drunk out there on the street
And that crazy man, who never understood anything

You will keep missing him and
You will never see me miss you




© 2017 Raas



Author's Note

Raas
I usually write stuffs I go through. But it's different this time. A lot of meaningless thoughts revolve around your head, when you are upset. And I'm here standing on the same line this time. Hope you enjoy this one. And let me know which side I should upgrade more in my poems.

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Heart touching. I liked the similes you have used.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Raas

10 Months Ago

Thank you :)
Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

You're welcome. ☺
Tender filled with raw sentiments. Great poem :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

10 Months Ago

Thank you :)
I like this a lot. Quite a lot of emotion, it's very good.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

11 Months Ago

Thank you :) I'm really really glad that you liked it

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Raas
Raas

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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A Poem by Raas