My love

My love

A Poem by Raas

Her hands didn't wait for me
The first place warmness is no more there
Someone felt it already.

I didn't know, did I?
Maybe it was better if I never knew
At least I could have those fake warms.

The warmness my hands were waiting to hold and feel
is no more there, it's gone.

You crying?
Don't cry, it's normal
just smile 
Even if you're hurt

I'm not crying
Just a tear like a raindrop fell
But! How do you know I cried?
Who are you? Where do you live?

"I'm you", it says
" The you inside you. I live inside you.
The you, you know better than anyone else
Then how could I not know?"

"Is she crying?", I asked
"I don't know"
"How could you not?"
"I'm not her"

She's crying because of the feelings?
Feelings like a raindrop in ocean I had?
I had for someone else before she came, that's why?

Come here, darling. Look at my eyes.
Don't look down though 
You won't see anything, you won't understand
You will just see my lips having a never ending smile.

"can you see it?" "See what?", she asked
Look at those hidden tears in my eyes
Those are melting ice from my heart

Those feelings weren't the only thing
Holding hands there was
Real life telepathy? Yes it was

I couldn't be the only one
But don't you worry 
The warmness? In my palms?

It's still safe, untouched and locked 
Only for you and you and you, my love.

© 2017 Raas



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Such beautiful words, so finely, delicately, sincerely laid. Whether true or not.. they feel real..

Your two final lines.. are love wrapped in magic.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

6 Months Ago

Oh, thank you so much :) I'm really glad to know you liked it. Thank you for reading :D
I feel like this is one of your best poems. The emotions are a lot more real here. Keep with it!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

10 Months Ago

Thanks a lot :)
This is very touch full and beautiful.you create real human feelings and emotions. Well done here.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much :) I am trying to be better and more real life :D
Claude Lantier------Post Mortem

11 Months Ago

You welcome I really like it. I am sure you will be better every day. Wish you happiness and love
Raas

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much
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Raas
Raas

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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