Over and Over again

Over and Over again

A Poem by Raas

In a winter's evening
Sitting under the sky in a park
Listening to Ed or maybe Sting's sad songs
I keep thinking about you
Over and Over again

When the night falls
And it gets darker
It turns colder and my hands freeze
I still keep sitting under the sky
Maybe on a rooftop this time
Thinking about you
Over and Over again

And when the sun shines over the sky
I look up and ask myself
"Why?"
I get no answers

"Will I never stop?"
No answers


© 2017 Raas



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Over and over again..how well I can understand a person who has to live with the same experiences.Particularly, I liked the poem not only because I also think "over and over again" and cannot stop doing that.. but because I ponder while listening to Sting's sad songs :) Thank you for this poem

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading. And it's also really good to know that you listen to Sting, as nobody.. read more
Maria

2 Months Ago

I do love him
Raas

2 Months Ago

Same hereee



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Over and over again..how well I can understand a person who has to live with the same experiences.Particularly, I liked the poem not only because I also think "over and over again" and cannot stop doing that.. but because I ponder while listening to Sting's sad songs :) Thank you for this poem

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading. And it's also really good to know that you listen to Sting, as nobody.. read more
Maria

2 Months Ago

I do love him
Raas

2 Months Ago

Same hereee
A soulful poem, of missing the love. Appealing and touching. Poetic style.


I'm quite a newbie here, luv meeting poetic interactives, so Pleez do review/comment my latest poem too, on suicide, I like to know poets thoughts.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading. And welcome to writerscafe. I surely would love to read your poems an.. read more
Gentle, worthwhile and wonderful use of words and thoughts. The words felt like private thoughts and private memory. Thank you Raas for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading, Coyote. I'm very glad that you liked it
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome.
No answers Does she love me or not but your mind may wonder and wonder a lot.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

5 Months Ago

So true :)
Thank you so much for reading
This poem expressed beautifully our sweet obsessions.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

5 Months Ago

Thank you for such kind words and thank you for reading. I'm glad that I could express that way :)
i love it ) reading it made me feel lonely and sad. so i thibk its good sign- you could describe the feelings precisely )

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

5 Months Ago

I'm so glad that you loved it.
Thank you for reading! :D
Well composed, has a very familiar feel to it, doesn't seem contrived.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

5 Months Ago

Yes. You got it right. It is not contrived.
Thank you for reading :)
A scene of loneliness has been effectively described. I really liked this. The questions you've asked the scene you have created is very relatable.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

5 Months Ago

I'm really glad to know that you liked it. Thanks for reading :)
Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

You are most welcome :)

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Raas
Raas

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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