Over and Over again

Over and Over again

A Poem by Raas

In a winter's evening
Sitting under the sky in a park
Listening to Ed or maybe Sting's sad songs
I keep thinking about you
Over and Over again

When the night falls
And it gets darker
It turns colder and my hands freeze
I still keep sitting under the sky
Maybe on a rooftop this time
Thinking about you
Over and Over again

And when the sun shines over the sky
I look up and ask myself
"Why?"
I get no answers

"Will I never stop?"
No answers


© 2017 Raas



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This poem expressed beautifully our sweet obsessions.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

2 Days Ago

Thank you for such kind words and thank you for reading. I'm glad that I could express that way :)
i love it ) reading it made me feel lonely and sad. so i thibk its good sign- you could describe the feelings precisely )

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

3 Days Ago

I'm so glad that you loved it.
Thank you for reading! :D
Well composed, has a very familiar feel to it, doesn't seem contrived.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

4 Days Ago

Yes. You got it right. It is not contrived.
Thank you for reading :)
A scene of loneliness has been effectively described. I really liked this. The questions you've asked the scene you have created is very relatable.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

4 Days Ago

I'm really glad to know that you liked it. Thanks for reading :)
Najam Us Saher

4 Days Ago

You are most welcome :)

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Raas
Raas

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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Hello there :) I'm Raas. I have been sharing my thoughts, my poems here for almost a year or maybe a year. You might know me as "Someonelost" which was my display name but no more. But just so you kno.. more..

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