Those Eyes

If you looked at me with those eyes...
I would melt into a pool of boiling passion...
I would drift into a fantasy of,
Floating on Clouds,a Starry sky,
Full Moon,over a Crystal Clear Montain Lake...
if you looked at me with those eyes...
you would hold me in your soul forever...
you would light my flame,
with every blink of your lashes...
you would leave me spent of all Glory
in a crumpled heap upon your floor,
at your feet,would be my,
Lonely Soul...

Reviews

[Jiggsy]

Beautuful love poem...love it..this must have been the beginning of "Lonely Soul" ?

[Nautili]

Oh my.....magnificent. My favorite one of yours, truly so beaautiful. Glad I found it tonight.

[LonelySoul]

considering the compitition,I am Honoured for my place in this contest,
many thanks to the readers,best wishes to everybody~LonelySoul~

[Yereziah]

aww this is lovely i really like it my favorite part is..."you would light my flame,
with every blink of your lashes"...love the imagery so creative

[Aspiring Angel]

Hello Michael,

I know this visit is a long time coming. I just do not get the chance to read and review like I would like to. Your write is loving and beautiful. I especially love your last lines.

Blessings,
Lesa