I Lit Your Candles

I Lit Your Candles

A Poem by LonelySoul

I lit the flame of your candles,
the path I chose,you lit for me,
shined your light into my weary eyes,
and lead me into your heart...
As our Candles burned,our love grew
our passion was soft and glowing,
the candle didn't shrink away as most do,
but stayed strong and tall,it's light seen from afar...
While adding a loving glow to a cozy room,
Storms outside blew,drafts came,
only to flicker our little flame,
it teased at the shadows on the walls,
as they danced upon our naked entwined bodies...
I looked on the candles glow,and they blushed in red,
they quietly watched us drift off to slumber,
guarding the night against total darkness...

 

LonelySoul

© 2008 LonelySoul


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Such a beautiful write Michael. I thank you for dropping in to see me the other day. I don't think I got to you in mail. These lines were the ones that grabbed me the most of your words.
"As our Candles burned,our love grew
our passion was soft and glowing,
the candle didn't shrink away as most do,
but stayed strong and tall,it's light seen from afar..."

It is a blessing to have a candle stand strong and tall in this day and age.

Blessings,
Lesa


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Such a beautiful write Michael. I thank you for dropping in to see me the other day. I don't think I got to you in mail. These lines were the ones that grabbed me the most of your words.
"As our Candles burned,our love grew
our passion was soft and glowing,
the candle didn't shrink away as most do,
but stayed strong and tall,it's light seen from afar..."

It is a blessing to have a candle stand strong and tall in this day and age.

Blessings,
Lesa


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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