Fiddled

You fiddled with a heart that was already broken

Played doctor on it 

Stitched it up

Then ripped it out

Chewing on the bruising 

Making me scream in pain

You fiddled with a mind that was already mad

Filling it with thoughts and dreams

Making it smile once again

Then put back in my nightmares

Making me go psychotic all over again

You fiddled with a soul that was already so dark, so alone

Making it bright and happy

Not a care in the world

Didn't you noticed that the fire you released

Accidentally burned it into a shriveled up piece?

I fiddled with a crazy man

Who loved to hurt little girls

He fiddled and giggled

As he watched me come to life

Right when my light was there

He fiddled with the switch

Turning it off back to utter darkness

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Favorite lines:
"Chewing on the bruising
Making me scream in pain"

I have written some dark stuff, but there are phrases and concepts that show up from time to time that just STUN!! Even on vampire sites I've joined and written on, I have not seen one like the one YOU wrote, being that bruises come from blood and of the like. Never mind. lol I Love it. You have such a fresh mouth and the way you speak just makes me want to k... I really like the way you word things. : ) *Big Hugzz* The first four lines of the last stanza is probably the creepiest of lines I've seen from you!! If Pinocchio were a girl and not that little wooden boy who became a donkey, those four lines sound like he carved a "special hole" where Geppetto got a little fresh on the doll "springing her to life" with some awkward honeymoon time with the doll.O.K. That's enough of that. lol Every new stanza starts and stops, perfectly. There is no reason to pick out things that only suit me as a writer/reader because I Love the way you have written almost 100% of your poems, and this goes for the same on here, as well!! Great job!! Beautiful, Gabby..... xoxox -Mark