Last Time

 

I looked into your eyes, I saw a light die

And then I knew

This moment wasn’t meant to last forever

I felt the end coming

It was coming

My hopes, my love, all would shatter as I felt you walk away

I listened to you speak of all you have dreamed of

I knew it would be the last time

Oh it would be the last time

 

I saw into your soul, I felt all things turn cold

And then I knew

This moment wasn’t meant to last forever

My life, my smile, all would be gone as I felt you walk away

I closed my eyes and tried to hold you for awhile

I knew it would be the last time

Oh it would be the last time

 

You said you had to go, somehow time seemed to slow

And then I knew

This moment had reached the end of forever

I felt the end coming

It was coming

My day, my heart, it all would die as I felt you walk away

Never had I treasured the moments when we had to part

I knew it would be the last time

Oh it would be the last time

Reviews

[Mary]

loved it, you can truly feel the pain and it writing that is a very good thing!

[JohnnyB]

Fantastic writing, Lorame! The structure, flow, and emotion shown is outstanding. I've been on both sides of this final meeting and neither side feels worth a damn. I'm looking forward to reading more!