Undone

"Some rewards are worth the wait"

Undone

By: Lorraine

May 26, 2007

 

Drenched

In the cool of the moon

I merge

Peacefully

Into thoughts of nothingness

Emptying the burdens

Accumulated

Throughout the day

Treasuring every moment

Of silence

In this solitary pause--

My promised reward!

 © Lorraine 2007

 

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Life is so full of noise! What a way to be good to yourself! Expressed nicely!

[kurrupted]

peace, calmness and the beauty of silence Nicely depicted.
EVEN THE POEM ITSELF SEEM TO ENJOY THE PEACE AND CALMNESS AS IT OOZES OUT IN A SHORT ,BUT POWERFUL, SILENT BUT SWEET MANNER..........NICE PEACE

[A.J. Smith]

Nice...love the peaceful feeling this evokes.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love it... we sometimes need to take those quiet moments and just let all our troubles and fears slip into the silence as we enjoy just being alive... your words of tranquility are so beautifully written.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful expression of peace and renewal! Just to be able to wait in silence for one moment and to find rest. Love how your words just seem to fall like rain... Wonderful!