Perspectives

Perspectives
By: Lorraine Pearson
May 22, 2008

She wanders the beach alone
Oblivious to the goings on…
Some snicker,
"She's a wandering waif-"
Others see one "looking to take."
Still, more eyes follow,
Assuming, "independence and strength."
While...

She wanders the beach alone
Oblivious to goings on…

© Lorraine Pearson 2008

© 2008 Lorraine Pearson

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"Oblivious to the goings on"...
Not deliberately... she's just preoccupied. Trying to make such an important decision requires all of her resources. That's why she came to the beach today after all, to think, to focus, to decide. She's hoping to find a clear perspective.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Forest Green

Your poem trembles with reality...excellent. Truly a reality incidental to the imaginings of others.

You're the best at what you do, Lorraiyne.

Thanks for your work...!

Daniel

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Poeticpiers

i liked the concept. Perceptions differ from person to person As long as she knows her intent and purpose ofwhat possible interest to her are what others think
You deliver yourmessage clearly in well written poetic prose

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 26, 2008

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Lorraine Pearson

Largo, FL

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I am a freed soul that enjoys writing as much as reading. Its exciting to be amongst others in a forum such as this where no matter the path I'm on in my journey through life, I know I can express wh.. more..