Unraveling Change

Unraveling Change

A Poem by Lorraine Pearson

Unraveling Change
Category: Writing and Poetry

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Unraveling Change
By: Lorraine Pearson
July 1, 2008

Void of expression in
Empty confessions,
Distantly folded inside an abyss.
Mystery surrounding, my
Thoughts so astounding-
Patiently waiting, not wanting to miss-
An end to survival, when
One soul unravels;
Desiring to merge with another in dance!


© Lorraine Pearson 2008


© 2008 Lorraine Pearson



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What a compelling and thought provoking work of art.
Your word selection for this emotion is outstanding

Your finishing line takes the reader into his/her world of imagination and allows them to
stay for as long as they desire

A short poem with power... propelling the readers' soul to find a peaceful place to rest

Hear that?... It applause just for you!

Well done


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Maybe it's the mood I'm in right now, but this seems like it would be a privledge to see on one hand and a bit scary on the other!

Posted 6 Years Ago


What a compelling and thought provoking work of art.
Your word selection for this emotion is outstanding

Your finishing line takes the reader into his/her world of imagination and allows them to
stay for as long as they desire

A short poem with power... propelling the readers' soul to find a peaceful place to rest

Hear that?... It applause just for you!

Well done


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A bit of mystery and intrigue mixed with remorse and regret, I could interpret this many ways, i love that about this poem. You are quite an artist.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lorraine Pearson
Lorraine Pearson

Largo, FL



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