Grow Up!

Again, a poem i wrote an year back wen i ws confused

They tell me I am immature,
They tell me they are really sure.
They tell me not to, give up,
And try bit harder to grow up.

They treat me like a little kid,
They tell me "Wake Up, Wake Up Sid!"
They never asked me "Wassup?"
Why I dont want to grow up?

I know they really do care,
But I also have to dare.
In race of life I've to buck up
And prove them that I can grow up...

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

An excellent and very well written poem.........and to tell you the truth.......i hear them say 'grow up', everyday!

[Penny]

You're welcum & hearing 'grow up' everytime is hard as i said earlier. I empathise wid u:-P:-D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks......feels gud to know i am not the only one! :-p

[Vidya Bacchus]

Growing up is never easy well written:)

[Penny]

Thnx vidya. As it sounds from ur review u hv also hd probs. In growing up.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes I also had problems growing up but with age brought reason and your priorities change and the things that bothered you so much before don't so much as time passes.You will be fine and you are welcome my friend:)

[Penny]

Thnx. And dat ws very wise on ur side. Wats ur age btw?
Just jokin' no need 2 tell

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha I am the ripe old age of 33.When I was younger I felt the way you do I remember it well.Take it from me life gets better

[Penny]

Thnx again.. for appreciating & 2 tell u all things r quite better nw, i'm growing up one step at a time..

[Tassawwur]

Simple words defining the confusion.As for growing up everything happen with time.Keep writing.

[Penny]

Tenkew all for liking it so much, you are definitely giving me what i always wanted as a writer..

[Blossoms]

You say you wrote it when you were confused. You wrote it right. Good work. I like it :)

[Sami Khalil]

It sounded like a song of confusion...Bravo