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Monsoon

Monsoon

A Poem by Penny
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Reflection of my present situation

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Others wait for clouds,
I wait for you.
My eyes get wet, when it rains..

© 2014 Penny



Author's Note

Penny
Another haiku

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''I LIKE TO CRY IN RAIN BECAUSE NO ONE CAN SEE MY TEARS'' - I FOUND THIS HAIKU INTERESTING EVEN IF IT IS OF ONLY 3 LINES... SOMETIMES YOU DONT NEED TO EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS BRIEFLY, A SINGLE SENTENCE CAN DESCRIBE THE WHOLE SITUATION...
VERY GOOD HAIKU,,
LOVED IT...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot friend. Really a heartfelt review and praise. I'll cherish it for long.

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Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

ITS BEEN A PLEASURE.... YEAH IT SHOULD BE 'IN BRIEF'... THANKS FOR THE RPLY..



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''I LIKE TO CRY IN RAIN BECAUSE NO ONE CAN SEE MY TEARS'' - I FOUND THIS HAIKU INTERESTING EVEN IF IT IS OF ONLY 3 LINES... SOMETIMES YOU DONT NEED TO EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS BRIEFLY, A SINGLE SENTENCE CAN DESCRIBE THE WHOLE SITUATION...
VERY GOOD HAIKU,,
LOVED IT...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot friend. Really a heartfelt review and praise. I'll cherish it for long.

.. read more
Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

ITS BEEN A PLEASURE.... YEAH IT SHOULD BE 'IN BRIEF'... THANKS FOR THE RPLY..
WoW!!!!
this is hands down brilliant......
i absolutely loved it!!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Thanks a million times.
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

you are very welcome dear poet.............!!! :) :)
I don't like Haiku's very much honestly.
Though for how short this is, it has big depth and meaning.
pretty cleaver little write :)
You have a creative mind.
I liked this though.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it.
cimmy wuv xxxooo

2 Years Ago

No worries hun :)
Penny

2 Years Ago

:-) ... :-)
sometimes all you need is a small sentence that expresses so much!
love it !

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Exactly.. in just one sentence you have said all I wanted to hear. Thanks dear friend.
It takes a lot of work to write a haiku that has meaning and potrays power, you've done it very nicely. Love it :) keep writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Thaks a lot Abbey. This review means a lot to me.
Nice free verse...
I like it..Keep it up..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

M.A.Rathore

3 Years Ago

Welcome always....Please read some of my haiku from my book, "Rathore's Haiku Poetry"..
Penny

3 Years Ago

For sure sir.
M.A.Rathore

3 Years Ago

Good. Abd let me how you feel after reading it..
"Others wait for clouds,
I wait for you.
My eyes get wet, when it rains.."

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh I got myself into this albeit unintentionally and because it was unintentionally I ended up reading a fair amount based on the kind and on point suggestions by Nusquam Esse. As I said I did not want to arive at a Haiku yet I also assumed incorrectly. It is not strictly meter bounded or syllable defined I think there is a allegorical language associated to engage into an experience that by definition should convey the essence of a experience in nature and/or the season and in a very delicate quasi intuitive way all that linked to human nature. And after I just type that all I can do is laugh and realized that irony is not a dead scene yet.

Hope this confuses you even more Penny

But in the meantime I do like your poem thankyou

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

3 Years Ago

Does that whole paragraph mean ANYTHING? btw.. thanks i am glad you liked it.
Rene Salinas

3 Years Ago

Sorry that's why I laughed in the end it was supposed to be help but then I realized that it was way.. read more
Penny

3 Years Ago

Ok. But that was helpful and confusing..

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