Guilty as charged

Guilty as charged

A Story by Penny
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I wrote it taking inspiration of the first line from a writing prompt. Just a short dialogue. If you feel offended or disturbed reading it, kindly don't review I don't want these emotions to affect th

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"These are the things I no longer wish to understand. Why you sabotaged our life? Why you let us remain in your life as a cancer? Why you continued a relationship for the namesake?"

"But I" said the man as I interuppted "Shh.. I said I don't need an answer. Its too late now"
"I am your father" said he from behind my back.
I turned to face him. He looked weak, his tears seemed to ask something. It was unbearable! I spat on his face.

"You got all this because of me" he said
"And I lost everything I haven't got because of you too. How.. How long will you pretend Mr. Sharma? You showed the world by not divorcing Mummy that you've changed. When actually you gave us a place under your roof and took minimal financial responsibility of us, made us dependent, because Mummy couldn't leave you due to fear of society." I smiled brightly "So now I pay you back. The world thinks you are mentally I'll, thanks to me and your prodigal son still keeps you in his house. But you'll be locked in this room which has a window that never opens. Don't worry you have a bed here, a proper washroom, and a fan to relieve you from heat. Chill! You won't die in here but it is certainly not a place worth living. Your meals will be given to you from under the door, pray it keeps you alive."

"I am sorry" he cried.
"Not like this, on my feet! Put your head on my feet. Bow down" I said proudly.
And he exactly did that. I said "Just pray to god that I have mercy on you and leave you in an old age home to rot"

I finally left the room, feeling strong and relieved. I locked him. He was still crying. May be I was evil, may be I committed a sin. But I was happy being guilty. Guilty as charged.





By:- K.C. Penny

© 2015 Penny



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WoW!!!
dark and powerful........strong character........and dialogues.........
shocking many revelations in just a few lines......brilliant......
i loved it!!!
:)
p.s. there maybe some grammatical errors.......i am not sure........just my opinion......

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

I know their may be some errors, but I just wrote in a flow and its the first draft, so.. Anyway tha.. read more
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

always a pleasure.............:) :)



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this is a very intense story...left me at a loss for words, so much anger in it it practically jumps out at you.very powerful writing indeed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot cycy. Frankly all this is unexpected, I had not in my wildest dreams imagined that this.. read more
This one is a hard hitting one. In actual life lines get blurred but within your soul you know what is right and that you do at any cost.
A brave writing.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Thanks avinash for a review I imagined when I first wrote this piece. Thanks a lot.
WoW!!!
dark and powerful........strong character........and dialogues.........
shocking many revelations in just a few lines......brilliant......
i loved it!!!
:)
p.s. there maybe some grammatical errors.......i am not sure........just my opinion......

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

I know their may be some errors, but I just wrote in a flow and its the first draft, so.. Anyway tha.. read more
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

always a pleasure.............:) :)
Wow. A powerful write. It kept me suspended till the end. Excellent. ...:)....

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome. ....:).....
Penny

2 Years Ago

:).... :)....
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:)......................

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