Ab Kisko Aawaz De (in Hindi)

Ab Kisko Aawaz De (in Hindi)

A Poem by Penny
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An ASAP piece, just got the idea and penned it down

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Ab kisko awaaz de,
Jo dekhle piche mud ke
Saanse chalti hain abbhi
Ya marr Gaye hum ghut ghutke

Ab kisko awaaz de,
Jo rok le in ashqon ko
Ya kehde ek baar hi
Jee bhar ke rolo ab toh

Ab kisko awaaz de,
Jo baat Kare humse bhi
Ya padhkar bass khamoshi
Jazbaat padhe mere bhi

Ab kisko awaaz de,
Koi thehre toh pal bhar ko
Jo thamle baahon mein apni
Aur kabhi na chhode humko..

© 2015 Penny



Author's Note

Penny
Yeh toh shuruyat, koi bhi sujhav, mashvira Jo aapke mutabiq iss nazm KO behtar baba sakta hai, zarur dijiye..

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i have that same feeling, quite often..............
beautifully written......
reminds me of the song: mud kar kise dekhta hai mere dil, tera kaun hai jo aawaz dega"
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Bahot bahot shukriya.. Kaisa ittefaq hain ke aap bhi isse ittefaq rakhte hain.
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

badnaseebi ki tanashahi.............
What a lovely poem in Hindi! It's so vibrating in deep emotions. I just love the style and feelings expressed.
The question remains there "Ab kisko Awaj den... "
So beautiful piece!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Rathore ji for this insightful review.. Shukriya.
arey waah! bahut bhaav se shabdo ko piroya hai aapne.......hindi me zarur likhte rahiyega.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Avashya.. Yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai.. Bahot shukriya aapka
Ab hum aap ko kya sila de is pyare se tohfe ka.
Bahut hi khubsurati se piroya hai in alfajon ko.
Mukammil mustakbil hai ye.
Khubsurat, kuch dard hai, jo bahut kush bayan karti hai.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Waiting for the English version if you ever do...:)...............

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Thanks buddy.... It is actually the first draft. I will soon the write a translation too but. Thanks.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You have welcome muchly. ....:)......
bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

2 Years Ago

Bahot bahot shukriya..

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Added on July 21, 2015
Last Updated on July 21, 2015
Tags: Hindi, sad, first draft

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Penny
Penny

lucknow, India



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