" It's not Goodbye"

"Loyal build Love 😍"

You left me when I needed you by my side,
Without you there's no one I can admire,
Being with you is only my desire,
You ignored me when I wished to hear your voice,
That's the only thing I can't hide,
Like when the oceans hates its noise,
Leaving my heart pain at night,
Waiting for you, and for your sign,
Is this the" Love " for you!
Leaving me waiting beside you!
Is this the fairness of the earth,
Killing inside me to depth,
You were not there for me,
But I'll always be here for you♥️

Author's Note

Please, Ignore grammar problems!
Waiting for your comments

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Hope you don't mind me re-vamping your wonderful poetry; but perhaps it would have more impact text formatted in a way that's suggests the writer is penned this whilst crying/sobbing:

You left me
When I needed you by my side

Without you
There’s no one I can admire

Being with you
Is only my desire

You ignored me
When I wished to hear your voice

That's the only thing I can't hide

Like when
The oceans hate its noise

Leaving me here
Pain at night

Waiting for you
And for your sign

Is this the" Love "for you?

Leaving me
Waiting beside you

Is this
The fairness of the earth

Killing
Inside me to depth

You
Were not there for me

But I'll always be here for you♥️

Just an idea ... :-)

[Losy Waleed]

Of course, I don't mind and wow it's amazing btw!
Thanks for reviewing mine.
It's an awesome idea 💡

[ROXANE DORSEY]

nice poem thanks for sharing.

[Losy Waleed]

Thanks a lot, Roxane! 🌸
Thanks for reviewing my writings
🎈🌸

[Jimmy Yetts]

This is the nature of love too many offer.
Your deep devotion elicits only self-centered indulgence from him.
Well put, LOSY!

[Losy Waleed]

Thanks a lot for reading Jimmy!
Your comment made me happy, really! And it's my first poem as well.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Your first?
Promising work, young poetess!