A Cat's Dream

I closed my eyes and saw a fish

swimming in my water bowl.

"Don't make me a dish,"

the sweet fish asked,

"but take me back to the rabbit's hole.

He's preparing a feast

and all is invited,

so please take me east

I'm so excited,

to dine on a cat

just imagine that!"

I opened my eyes and ran to my bowl.

No fish in there,

just ants running to and fro.

Reviews

[Kenneth S.]

I own two felines myself and if they could read this, they would laugh like I'm doing right now.

[Emma Joy]

As near surreal as you'll get on a wet morning! Love the way this goes, builds momentum, line by line and is still there, quivering away. Love it, happily!

[Vanessa Rico]

No dont be serious! I loved this! I must admit that I am a cat person so I can perfectly picture this in my head! I love fun poetry like this! You have perfectly portrayed a cat's independent but fun-loving personality! Great job!

[Dream Weaver]

I always wondered what cats dream of and now I know :)
This was just precious...

[Sean Allen]

Nice and relaxing read. Loved it!

[quinfinn]

very clever and great fun... nice write!

[Judy Ponceby]

LOL :) I really enjoyed this!! No need to be serious all the time :) What a fun poem :)