Silence

This didn't remind me of anything but being silence and having no help at all

Every time I talk you can't hear me,
But I can hear myself,
When I speak it's silence,
when I'm alone there's silence,
I can't speak,nor sing,
Help me
I don't know who I am anymore
I'm not special,nor visible
Help me,
I can hear and see myself but no one else can
No one.
Help me
I feel dead,not alive,

Help me,
Im trapped
Help me,

Im gone and there's silence.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Levin]

Well, you did a great job of portraying helplessness, and you have a very strong voice. I just didn't know how you could hear yourself if you couldn't speak or communicate. But, the idea of trapped thoughts was well spoken.