Kiss Me

Feelings produced by my boyfriend ^-^

Kiss me on the rock outside,

Beneath the stars where we hide.

Kiss me long, hard, and deep;

Where afterwards will come no sleep.

Kiss me. Make me cling to you,

And long for all the things you do.

Kiss me. Don’t you go again.

I want you, though it’s a sin.

Kiss me. You’re the one I want;

‘Cause when you don’t, the feelings haunt.

Kiss Me.

Reviews

[V.R.S.C.]

Lovely Soul,

Your writing is fitting for the name you have chosen on here! This felt deep and passionate and loving. The only thing that stood out to me as unfitting was "though it's a sin". Nothing about this felt wrong or worthy of question. You captured well the beauty of simple unwavering passion and to question it takes away from the confidence that I feel you get across well through the rest of the piece.

Overall, really well done. Thank you for sharing!

[MOON]

Passionate write.

[just is]

This is so sweet, loving and fun.
Such a wonderful write.

[Jeffery-Maximilian-Kolb..]

Very Wonderfully Wrote, and very Passionate and Romantic

[Chris]

A "fun" little rhyme.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Great emotions and imagery, awesome job! :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Loving, touching piece. Nicely done.

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

I love the flow and feeling of this!