Tell Me You Love Me

In the dark, hold me close.

Kiss me now, while no one knows.

Hold me tight, don’t let go.

Let your true inner love show.

 

Stroke my face and hold my hand.

Make me truly understand.

Let it loose, like grains of sand

Who’s domain the whole world spans.

 

Move with me, follow my rhythm.

Nowhere I’d rather be than with him.

Tell me I made the right decision.

Let my heart out of this prison.

 

Tell me you love me.

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i love this poem's sensuality!

[Harlon Rivers]

This poem triggers the best possible, adoring emotion from within the hopeless romantic in my soul...This is so beautiful it feels like the memories of a forgotten dream worn down by time. Your thoughts brightened that memory of my reverie if only for a moment...You truly have a "Lovely Soul."

[....]

Such a wonderful, beuatiful write.
Much enjoyed this.

[Monica]

I really love how sincere the emotions are...beautiful :)

[MOON]

Touching.

[Jeffery-Maximilian-Kolb..]

Sweet Longing for those 3 special words, Excellent write!!!

[lifelikehappyness]

it is....truely beautilful

[Chris]

I like the thoughts. The first two stanzas flow well but the third starts with a stumble - maybe it's just the rhyme choice (a working pair) but the timing feels 'off'. A fair overall rhyme structure too.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I agree, this is truly a lovely piece! I like the second stanza the best.
This poem sounds so sincere! Really good. :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Lovely touching romantic piece. Nicely done.