He's MINE

Some people made me mad. They dis my bf, and manwhores keep bothering me. Sorry for the profanity. Had to let it out.

What the f**k are you looking at?

Yeah, I'm going out with "that"

He has a name, don't you know?

He is My KURTIS MITCHELL

So shut the f**k up and go away.

Go back to your toys, go on and play.

I am taken, so back off, you w****s.

Dealing with you is worse than chores.

Don't be a pessimistic son of a b***h.

Go on, go and suck your own dick.

Cause baby, you know where my heart belongs.

You know who is my inspiration and song.

C'mon, don't make me say it twice.

F**k off, p***y, go live your own life.

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

you have to contact me, You won the competition after you closed your account.. (: ttys -shaun

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love the anger. It is good to express yourself. I really thought you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.

[AK]

Amazing poem! I imagined an extremely angry girl haha. the straightness adds to its power. Keep writing!

[Gurdeep...The Lost<>]

Different!....but still shows talent..)

[Tomislav Petricevic]

This is violent, but in a good way! I imagined you with a threatening look while reading the first line, lol. This poem feels so refreshing. I don't see many writings like this, and it's awesome! Good job.

[Dream Weaver]

Harsh but very real, and reality always makes for better writing!

[Chris]

A good definitive Rant... well said.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the honest and direct words in this poem. Sometime need to protect what you need and love. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Reflectus]

It is the best feeling to let it out through poetry, and well, I'm glad you wrote down your feelings, bet you feel a lot better. I salute your attitude, those manwhores can say whatever they want to say, they may try to push you and your boyfriend down the drain, but you love him, and I admire that possessiveness you have, and I bet he loves you a lot too, and well, what matters more than that, right? At least you are loved, don't forget that. Let them live their lives however they want to, but it's best you ignore them and live your life happily, that would make them even more mad when they realize their taunts aren't working. I enjoyed this poem, the energetic vibe of it, shows a very lively sensation, and well done.

[SilentNiaAngel]

Hell Yea I Love this