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Unfortunately, the thought of you crossed my mind

Images and colours crash and exploded from time

The best of which brings tears to my eyes

They make tracks which display our demise

The painting of my face when I see your smile

At that moment in time I could run a mile

But that image is but a flash of what I can reconcile

Something akin to the embers of a dying fire

Reviews

[Morrigan Nicole]

Excellent, of course. exceptionally powerful. But what's up? it came across as very sad to me and that makes me wonder if it was written because you were feeling this way, like something happened to you? or is it fiction and nothing personal? Just curious and a little worrisom. You okay?
Really, though, i like it a lot. i saw the title and automatically clicked on it, and i will tell you i don't regret it.

Great job!

[Octob3r Star]

aw

[Priscilla Sayers]

And so the story goes, many times, images of a lost lover, an old flame, will seep into my mind and oh, how we can manage to salvage enough for an ember of recollection.

[Nona]

"dying fire"! great capture of vanishing feelings! very honest

[AtticusBlack]

Definitely sad, but definitely thought provoking, short and sweet, yet not so sweet if you get me haha, definitely a nice write.

[Lowesy]

it's happened before, but i'm ok, i'm always ok :D thanks for the review!