My Sunset Balcony

 I sit here waiting

Waiting for my sunset

My sunset to help bring

Bring the morning

The new day awaits me

For now I wait for my sunset

On my sunset balcony

 

I see the country

The tree blossoms

I see the Cherry Blossom trees

The green grass turn purple

In the sunset's light

I sit here and see

The whole world below me

Under my sunset balcony

 

 

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

Nice poem, keep writing, never stop.

[Heidi Hallucination]

Um I like this poem because I was sitting in the country side at my godmother's house and i was sittin on the top floor (3rd floor) and I thought it might be a good poem

[thecoolone52]

I liked the imagrey and different colors you used to paint the sunset.... Amazing how beautiful sunsets can be when the weather is sooooo amazing.... nice poem!!!

[smiggle wiggle]

I luv it! hehehehe