When you kiss a Vampire

i wanted to write a bit about vamps so this is what i came up with :)

I loved him, i truely did,

I kissed him the way I always wanted to,

yet the only thing i got in return was,

the sweet flow of my blood,

the sharp teeth as they break my skin,

it hurts... yet i love this feeling,

the feeling of love, but not for me as a Human, but as food,

my heart begins to quicken as he runs his hand down my side,

shoving his teeth deeper in my neck,

can't help but scream...

but yet no answer just a grin of joy from him,

i feel a little lightheaded but i don't care, for some reason i feel as if i am no longer me,

no longer able to think, move my body, it holds in place,

before I know it... I'm Dead...

dropping me to the ground,

body lifeless, not love for my Human self... no love, just a lovely snack...

i feel so alone my body a light gray,

my lips a bright red, my eyes losing color of green...

I begin to speak, but no words come out, the man looks at me laying there and just smiles, thanking me, showing is long fangs to me, laughing at his 'work',

he suddenly reaches into his pocket and pulls out a simple red rose,

placing it on my chest.... he leaves,

this is my death...

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Ha yes this is how it would be to kiss a vamp. I really enjoyed this. Well done.

[Jazique]

Oh true to kiss a vamp is to give your life. Excellent job with descriptions and never would have thought to write of the red kiss. I love the pic also for this being an anime person. Well anyways excellent job using creativity.