These Unkissed Lips of Mine

These Unkissed Lips of Mine

A Poem by Luchia Noname
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this a poem for me, my unkissed lips :)

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These unkissed lips of mine,
They have never felt the warmth of another,
They shine bright red,
sometimes it feels empty knowing that they have never felt love,
The tender touch of another,
wanting someone to just touch them sweetly with there fingertips,
or brush there lips against them,
These unkissed lips of Mine,
that have never felt the heat of another,
it's like being in a middle of a lake wondering what will happen next,
or staring at each star in the sky wondering which one will fall first, 
to these untrained lips, things seem pointless,
but with a little training they will shine redder than before,
the kiss of a lifetime,
my lips crave, they yearn, for a single touch,
silk against my body,
pure white wrapped around me,
pure as a unpicked flower,
at an age of mine to have yet been kissed,
a smile comes to my lips,
me as pure as a dove,
I guess this just how things work,
Signed, These Unkissed Lips of Mine.

© 2011 Luchia Noname


Author's Note

Luchia Noname
this is about me :)

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All I can say is I love it. You a very talented poet. I am now going to stalk more of your poetry. Thank you for this. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful write. I can really feel the longing. I like the font color and the pic well. Excellent work!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know I just love your anime pics and I know how you feel man mine shimmer the lonely red too. Anyways well done with this poem and the color coordinations and expressed emotions and all even though unkissed is not a word.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Passinate write, I really enjoyed this, nicely written....xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


First off I love how you used the red font which reminds me of red lips, kissing and all that stuff...I appreciate the small things like that in poems

Really enjoyed the flow you had going with the poem, the rhythm was there and it is something different...It's headed in that hot and steamy direction especially towards the end but thats just me lol

Good poem, fitting title and overall nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 23, 2011
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Luchia Noname
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I love Anime and Manga, it is pretty much my life, i read and watch a lot of them, some of my fav animes r- bleach, naruto, carcaptor, black cat, shugo Chara, mermaid melody, soul eater, kaidan rest.. more..

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