Together & Forever

i was like this close to falling asleep and it stared writing itself in my head. i tried to ignore it thinking i would just write it in the morning but then the urge to write it just got stronger and stronger.

i've waited so long

to hear your beautiful song

but it is your choice

to let me hear your voice

oh how long i have waited

oh how much i have hated

being away from you

for days, less than two

it's seemed like forever

since we've been together

i've missed you so much

waiting to again feel your touch

oh how i barely seem to see

how much you have missed me

i'm not sure what to do

so you take the steps; only two

them i am in your arms

there are no harms

i hold you tight

if you try to let go, i will fight

our lips meet

& i feel my cheeks heat

it feels as if you've been away

30x the one long day

i dont want you to ever leave again

i dont want to be the lonely hen

i want to stay right here

where there is no fear

of where you are

or wishing the road was made of tar

so you could go nowhere

for all i care

we could be in a snowstorm

but i would be warm

because i would be with you

until it was through

when you leave me

i can barely see

because there is a tear

in my eye because you are not near

i cant stand to be

if you are not with me

you are my everything

without you, my body would painfully sting

so please stay with me

be to me what the sun is to a tree

be my sun

'i love you, hun'

i sigh at the sound of your voice

i'm happy you made that choice

'i love you too'

and oh how that is true!

i thought to myself, 'i need him'

my sun must not be dim

it must shine bright

as it does when you hold me tight

so dont let go

oh, no

dont move away from me

you'' make it harder to see

just hold be against your chest

just let us rest

i want to be with you. us together.

i want you forever

Author's Note

please ignore all the spelling and grammar errors. i am aware of them. i wrote this when i was VERY tired so i did not take the time to edit it and make sure everything that was supposed to be capitilized was. i just wanted to type this up before it left my head when i fell asleep so i did it as fast and as easy i could;

Reviews

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

This is a very beautiful piece with amazing flow!!!
No worrys on the grammer & spelling it doesn't have to be perfect when it comes from the heart!!
Great Write!!
Kudos!!

[Laraine Davis]

wow nice rhymes. It would have taken me forever to rhyme that well. seriously.. good poem too. nice feeling. i really liked it. KEEP WRITINGGG(:

[alyssa]

Its really good i get the same feeling sometime just right something that comes to me....good right
alyssa