Falling man

A man falls from his office.

 

 

Falling Man

 

 

                       I am falling through the sky!

 I love the feeling of the cold wind swimming around my body!

 

                   I look at my feet above me as I fall!

  I feel like a bomb falling on pearl harbour!

 

                        I am falling from my office window!

  I am heading towards the pavement below!

 

                        I chose to jump!

                        I am happy that I have finally made this decision!

 

 

I am ready….

 

Reviews

[hmm]

like this one, very nicely done. I love the imagery

[Stef Outsiders]

I have I fear of heights and while reading this i felt my stomach drop, I felt like I was looking through his eyes and seeing my office disappear as I fall..
Amazing work!!

I love this one! the velocity of your fall in your words release the pure fear.... awesome!