Eternal

Eternal

A Poem by Stacey Lynn Fore
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Just a poem i wrote for a friend that was suicidal.

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Let my love be the light

When you're blinded by the darkness

I promise I'll guide you

Away from this endless night

Please don't pull yourself out of the rain

Not just yet, not ever

I'd die a million deaths

Endure all your pain

Take the very life from my chest

To restore your still and silent breath

I promise you, you're not alone honey

You're never alone

© 2009 Stacey Lynn Fore


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Posted 14 Years Ago


you are a beautiful soul, and great friend....priceless!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is nice ,how easy flowing words and sentiments..full of deep feelings
Let my love be your light,when blinded by so much dark
promise I be your guide..out of this endless night
Dont come out of so much rain,not yet not ever
I will die a million deaths to take all your pain
take my life from me if it gives you back a breath
Promise you to never be alone,will always
be there for you
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cool, good job. I like the way it ryhmes sometimes but not all the time. It flows nicely too. Awesome.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 11, 2009

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Stacey Lynn Fore
Stacey Lynn Fore

Mountain Home, AR



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My name is Stacey, I'm 18, and married to the most wonderful and amazing man in the world. I'm currently working on several rough drafts of some poems that could use alot of work. I'm open to contruct.. more..

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