Soothing Sea

Soothing Sea

A Poem by Brittany Zedalis
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a short poem about my trip to Puerto Lindo, Panama where we stayed on a boat for 8 days with my husband's grandparents. it was fantastic!

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champagne gleams in starlight
encapsulating souls of the ocean
weave through the coral maze
shades of the setting sun
shoot across the sky
golden eyes engulf a mind so alive

~Dead Snakes 2014~



© 2017 Brittany Zedalis



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There is always such a majesty to all of your work. I think part of what makes reading your poems such a spectacular experience is the sound you put with them. How is it that you add these videos with sound to your work? I like how you indented every other line here. Not only are your words beautiful, but beautiful to look at as well. This trip you went on sounds sublime! I always find that going somewhere different somehow sparks inspiration for new ideas. This is a fantastic piece of writing as usual. Just stunning.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

3 Years Ago

It was my first time leaving the country and boy it was awesome. Thank you!



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very beautiful
this is excruciating

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your work is often open. I interpret this piece differently every time I read it. I hope to reach this level of professionalism, this is my favorite of your work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

2 Years Ago

You're so kind. Thank you! ^-^
Amazing poem, I loved reading it, nicely written.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
Blackstar

3 Years Ago

Your very welcome.
Wow,

Love this vision and what you included--soothing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Josie!
Short and yet one of your best in my opinion. Very good imagery. Thank you

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
Ahhhhh, that is a beautiful place to visit.
And this poems does it justice.
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

3 Years Ago

Thank you! I miss it so much.
Matching Socks

3 Years Ago

Don't blame ya. :)
"Shades of the setting sun
shoot across the sky"...
The superpower of you words flew me to this place of scenic charm... lucid words but expressive ;)

~Sophy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

3 Years Ago

Somehow I missed this one. Thank you!
what a wonderful picture you've painted here! the acompanying sound made it sublime.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

3 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you think so.
What a beautiful sound, and poem dear B. I enjoyed this, you took me with you on the trip by words like a brief vacation, (while I am still on vacation myself lol), now that is beautiful... timeless... thank you for sharing this one. xx

- Elisa

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Elisa. ^-^

3 Years Ago

The pleasure is all mine, *p.s. I will return here more often, to relax he he*

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