Once Again

A write to start off the weekend

artwork by Felonyda "Blue Lagoon"

courtesy of sensual.artmam.com

 

 

It is dusk
night and day sensually merge
the sky is nearly violated
by vibrant shades
of vermillion and cinnabar
my thoughts are hijacked
by a backstairs rustling of desire
and once again, mon amour,
the night and I belong to only you

 

 

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Sensually beautiful... For such a concise piece, word choice is of the highest importance, as you have shown here. The words "sensually merge", "nearly violated", "hijacked", "rustling of desire", etc., all lead us in the right direction in terms of turning this little moment in time into something amourous and filled with vibrant emotion. Well done and enjoyed.

[Lydia Shutter]

Sarah, I always appreciate your wonderful comments. By the way, nice new photo! Lydi**

[Babe Roxx]

Once again...I'm enchanted by your words, Lydi...I'm full of delight just reading your poems...sublime.

[Lydia Shutter]

You flatter me so, Ev. Thank you, my friend. Lydi**

[Babe Roxx]

You're very welcome, Lydi...the flattery given is well deserved. :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

Glad I can enjoy your this Friday night poem even though I'm very late for the party, Lydi. As usual, your imagergy is powerfully awesome and arresting. Impressive poetry from a very gifted poet.

[Lydia Shutter]

Yup, you knew I posted it on Friday night! :) Thank you very much, Joyce. Lydi**

[Karen]

I love the idea of dusk being a sensual merging, like sybaritic foreplay where night is the bringer of passion. Beautiful poem and once again, so descriptive in so few words... that's what makes a true poet!

[Lydia Shutter]

I am honored by your comments, Karen. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[asdarkeyesclose]

'my thoughts are hijacked
by a backstairs rustling of desire'

nicely understated and romantic the way I like romantic! fantastic.

[Lydia Shutter]

The only way I write it! Thanks so much. Lydi**

[h d e rushin]

just lovely....wonderful write.
dana

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

Beautiful and sensual - love your use of color words here.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Rita. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Yikes ! It seems like a warm front has settled in. Definitely must be Friday night. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Love your comments, Jim....yup, Friday night is here! :) Thank you. Lydi**

[Anthony Hall]

A beautiful passion filled piece, Lydi, loved it and seductive graphic..Tony**

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Tony. After all, it IS Friday night! :) Lydi**

[Anthony Hall]

yes, Lydi and what a great Friday poem, loved it..Tony**

[Aelita]

Gorgeous write, my dear friend... simply beautiful :) ~Aelita~

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Aelita. Lydi**