Once Upon A Jazzy Night

Once Upon A Jazzy Night

A Poem by Lydia
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Just a little romantic fantasy

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artwork by Azalea Thomas "Why Hello"

courtesy of etsy.com

 

 

 

 

 

 

Once upon a jazzy night
while fireflies knocked on windows
desire soaked air carried
windy whistles to palm trees
veils were lifted
revealing pure
                   or impure
                                luxuria
the sweet taste of yes!
danced on tongues
as two dreams silently slipped
between satin covers

sated sighs were the only communication necessary
and they lived passionately ever after


© 2013 Lydia



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"the sweet taste of yes!
danced on tongues
as two dreams silently slipped
between satin covers

sated sighs were the only communication necessary
and they lived passionately ever after"~ Oh this is a lovely treat!...not only is this enticing, but also gives the romantic hearts what they desire... a wonderful "happy ending".. ~xoxo~:)



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Writing romantic and sensual poetry is my favorite...as you are fast realizing. Thanks for the wond.. read more



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as two dreams silently slipped
between satin covers
That is a very nice image...warm and romantic.
Kudos.
Enjoyed it....
Scott

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

3 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Scott. Lydi**
Scott Metro

3 Years Ago

:)
Scott.....
I truly live for those moments. I guess, I must say I love it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Lydi**
"... the sweet taste of yes! danced on tongues". Wow. Another one of those maximum impact lines placed just right in a delightful read. Kudos. ~Jim

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Jim. Hope life is treating you as it should! Lydi**
A beautiful painting and sweet and kind words of love. Good to fine good music and the comfort of another. No weakness in the amazing poem of passion.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thanks again. Lydi**
and they lived passionately ever after
Such romantic Lydii.Enjoyed the entire read

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Have a wonderful weekend. Lydi**
Nkosana B Masuku

4 Years Ago

Same to you :)
Wonderful. First it is beautifully phrased - "the sweet taste of yes" is a lovely turn of phrase. Second there is such delicious alliteration. Third the "pure or impure luxuria" was a deft touch, hinting at so much.

But what I really loved was the last line. Not only for the hope of a happy ending but for the subtle but important shift from the stand happily ever after. If only such endings were true.
Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Yes, if only......unfortunately poetry does not always reflect reality, does it? Thank you so much .. read more
"the sweet taste of yes!
danced on tongues
as two dreams silently slipped
between satin covers

sated sighs were the only communication necessary
and they lived passionately ever after"~ Oh this is a lovely treat!...not only is this enticing, but also gives the romantic hearts what they desire... a wonderful "happy ending".. ~xoxo~:)



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Writing romantic and sensual poetry is my favorite...as you are fast realizing. Thanks for the wond.. read more
"passionately ever after"...this is how your poetry will forever live on, Lydi! Your create your own brand of classic. the sweet, sweltering passion, the sensuality and depth of this poem carry the reader to dizzying heights. This is just sublime poetry, my friend. Loved it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Sanober, always a pleasure to see a comment from you, my friend. Thank you so much. Lydi**
Like a sweet sultry sigh on the page...wicked good and all that jazz!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Very cute comment, Frieda! Thank you so much. Lydi**
Reading this poem is like having silk pulled over the skin. Light yet completely compelling. If the reader has never been where this poem takes him it's a pity. However, the poem should at least help fill that void. ;-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

What a splendid comment this is. Thank you very much! Lydi**

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