The Moment

The Moment

A Poem by Lydia Shutter

 
 
artwork by patrician prints courtesy of etsy.com
 
 
 
 
A flash of leg
such a tasty aperitif
lust shaken and stirred
do you taste my need?
 
Anxiously you hover
ginger spice and desire
boldly displayed
in your hungry stare
 
The silent knowledge
of delicious consequences
sizzles in my soul
 
                       I belong to the moment

© 2013 Lydia Shutter


Author's Note

Lydia Shutter
It's Friday night! Happy Weekend Everyone!

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dear Lydi... almost a week later... but
still sizzles. A touch of James Bond...
shaken and stirred. Ginger spice and desire...
remembering the days of nylon hose with a
black seam up the back.
"The silent knowledge of delicious
consequences! I belong to the moment".
A Five Star review. truly... Patricia or 'Pat'



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thanks for picking up on the James Bond reference, Pat! I appreciate your comments so much. Have a.. read more



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I like the idea of the aperitif in this poem and how you develop that thought. You show how that first flash of flesh, that first intoxicating appetizer, plunges those lovers into a passionate concoction of pleasure. Happy Friday!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Happy Weekend, Christian. Thank you for the great comments. Lydi**
Such elegancy and desire.What a beautiful write

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Niko. Have a good weekend. Lydi*
Ginger and spice, everything is nice about this one, Lydi. I love the use of metaphors and it is just perfect for a Friday night!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

You know Friday night writes are my favorite. This was actually an oldie of mine...from 2008....but.. read more
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wonderful sexy read...love the pic too :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Raven. Have a wonderful weekend. lydi**
We own the moments , we belong to the moments , we create the moments then we echo them in memories...A splendid read and write...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Sami! Lydi**
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Added on August 16, 2013
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Tags: seduction, desire, passion


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