interlude of fulfillment

friday night makes the sparks fly

“fuschia” by cate parr of silverridgestudio

Courtesy of etsy.com

your eyes speak a language
           in which my soul longs to be fluent
sweet nothings float through the air
harmonizing with a silent chorus of stars
                                    the sighs of night caress me
my heart beats to the rhythm of your kisses
                              yielding to the passion
hiding between tangles in silken sheets
we nibble on sizzling tidbits of desire
you are my outburst of simmering emotion
             in this interlude of fulfillment
                          truly a scene meant for only us
pour toujours mon amour

Author's Note

okay, i never really pay attention to the captcha, but this one has me laughing, "asshake" :)

Reviews

[Daffy]

The opening words are really brilliant. Everyone would agree, I am sure. Viz: 'your eyes speak a language, in which my soul longs to be fluent'. Anyone who has made gentle love, and looked into those eyes, knows exactly what this sentence means. How is it the eyes look so rapturous at that time....full of love and longing, and caring, and ...oh! I so wish they looked like that all of the time!

[Lydia Shutter]

Wouldn't that be nice? :) thanks so much for the review, Daffy. Lydi**

[Scott Metro]

Very nice...a little spice.
The other shoe just dropped Lydia.....LOL.

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Lydia Shutter]

:) Thank you very much, Scott. Lydi**

[Scott Metro]

:)
.....................Scott......................

[Anand Sehgal]

you are my outburst of simmering emotion
in this interlude of fulfillment-

very good !

[Lydia Shutter]

WOW, Anand, two reviews from you on the same poem. Thank you so much for the time you take to read me and leave your thoughts. Lydi**

[Anand Sehgal]

Awesome use of language. Learnt quite a few things :)

[MAC]

how very romantic and such a passionate write. me likes

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for your review, Mark. Lydi**

[Lydia Shutter]

A wonderful amalgamation of two lovers.... interwoven in eachother.... heavy sigh here, you are at your best with this romantic write... I could get lost in these words, the artwork you chose is always the best, and I laughed about the captcha... lol such a beautiful write dear Lydi.. xx

- Elisa

[Lydia Shutter]

Romantic poetry is my favorite genre, no doubt about it. Glad you liked it, Elisa. Thank you once again. Lydi**

Yes, you're so good at it, very welcome, and no thanks... :) love to be here and read :)

[Neon]

Oh, Lydia .. your cool as usual .. you pretty ;)
I hope you enjoyed your this friday too as all always .. I enjoyed this write, it's made me cool and smiley too ... by the way, once again, the pic.'s too stunning but this time just as same as your beauty... O' Lydia... the pic. of that colorful woman taking me away to the world of Angels .. lol
Your the very cool writer who write very experimentally or yeah .. practically too .. lol

Keep writing.

[Lydia Shutter]

Neon, your reviews are so sweet. thank you very much. Have a good evening. Lydi**

[Neon]

Thanks, Lydia ..it's always my pleasure reading your stuffs and writing for you into the review ..
Am very sorry .. i've to sing out now..

Have a very good evening, Lydia :)

[Corset]

I love it when you speak french :P I especially appreciated the opening lines, to be fluent with the words of love, to know and love someone so well that the need for spoken words are not necessary. To be so completely in tune with another being of a shared love must be so amazing. beautiful write as always Lydia, inspiring.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much for your kind words. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

Your first line draws the reader in, a language in which the soul longs to be fluent - the language of love... *sigh*. Glad I found this Friday night delight, even though it's Saturday! :)

That captcha is hilarious! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

It made me laugh....and usually I pay no attention to them. Thanks for the review, Rita. I appreciate it. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"truly a scene meant for only us" every Friday night. LOL
When you're in love you tend to create scenes even in your mind...
I like this piece.

[Lydia Shutter]

Very true. Thank you so much for the review. Lydi**