how much

there is something very special about spending time with either of my granddaughters

         

painting by elaine feliciano courtesy of etsy.com NYoriginalpaintings

 

                    today

                                     you skipped

across the tense span of my life

scattering the baggage i've been forced to carry

                to parts unknown

          it’s true

while the sun was high in the sky

the strangely familiar flavor of happiness

danced across my taste buds

like spring rain watering flowers

your smile nourished my soul

                    that’s why

i’ll always write you poems full of sweetness

even put some icing and sprinkles on the top

hoping someday you will understand

how much your oma loves you

 

Author's Note

I spent the afternoon with my oldest granddaughter today. What a boost for my attitude. Just love my granddaughters!

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

what a beautiful sentiment.. you can feel the pure joy and love in this one girl.. I hope you are saving these for them to read later... imagery is whimsical and playful, it makes my heart smile as your radiant spirit dances across the page in sheer bliss.. what a sight to behold.. just lovely...

[Lydia Shutter]

I am, April....and they know I write poetry about them. They are the light in my life. Thanks for your review. Lydi**

[AprilRN1210]

you're more than welcome.. and that is awesome.. something that all of you can treasure.. warms my heart..

[Sanober]

Oh Lydi...your love for your Granddaughters is so precious, so deep that it makes my heart ache. Spending time with the people we love is simply the best thing in the world ..and with your lovely granddaughters, i can't even imagine how beautiful it must be. Yes, someday they will understand that kind of love. How I love this! What a gift it is to read your poetry, Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Sanober, thank you, my dear friend. So pleased to see a review from you on my poetry. Yes, we have to cherish the time we spend with those we love, absolutely. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, this one made me want to cry. I started late so it's going to be a long time before I have grandkids, but the sentiment is beautiful .

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much. Lydi**

[paddy d daly]

hi lydi, that is a beautiful piece of writing, have one granddaughter myself so I know where you are coming from,,,,really enjoyed it.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Paddy. Lydi**

[Ruth]

How beautiful, I feel like this when I have spent time with my nieces and nephew, breathes life into the day and the self :) x

[Lydia Shutter]

You know it, Poppy. thank you very much for the review. Lydi**

[Blood Ink Diary]

Precious memories that extend us in many ways in utter shine ! Lovely poem !

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[BlackRose]

Awe, what a lovely sweet poem. Flowers will always be in bloom, for this was a fab piece.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Rose. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

What a wonderful gift for your granddaughter! A gift like this will touch someone's heart and soul. Very endearing, Lydi. This will strengthen your relationship with her. Keep it up!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Dh. My granddaughters are so special to me. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I know you're special to them, too. They are so lucky to have you. In my case, I last saw my grandparents in my father's side when when I was in high school and I still remember how kind they are...but in my mother's side, when I was a little child...so I don't remember bonding time with them. Being with your loved ones is really a treasured time.

[Lydia Shutter]

You are so right. All my grandparents passed by the time I was 12. There is something wonderful about knowing the older generation and learning their history.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I have my wonderful parents and they are my treasures in life, Lydi.
Best wishes to you and your wonderful granddaughters!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, sweet one.

[Frieda P]

This gave my heart goosebumps Lydikey, how sweet, I bet she adores her oma too!

[Lydia Shutter]

Awwww, thanks, Frieda. Love to see your smiling face on my page! Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Always love to read your sweet poetry my friend....my pleasure.

[Traci]

And this my friend is why I have missed your writing....truly a remarkably beautiful piece. The love you have for your granddaughters is sweet, and so genuine. They are truly blessed, as are you, sweet Lydia.

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, I am. Thank you so much for this lovely review. Lydi**

[Trace]

What a pleasant little poem for your Belo granddaughter.
Sweet and sincere.

Much enjoyed.
Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Trace. Both my granddaughters are special to me....nothing quite like their smiles to make my day. Lydi**