he

artwork by jose pacheco

the dandelions he picks
instantly become roses
he

finds meaning in café windows
then writes poetry with clouds
on the inky sky

kisses my mind with inspiration
tickles my tongue
with the perfect mélange
of naughty and nice

intrigues my curiosity
with a smile
makes me blush the color of wine
till i feel my own pulse beneath my skin

dresses me in acceptance
accessorizes me with understanding
hands me the carnelian sunset
he loves me

Reviews

[ANTO]

Dandelions becoming roses just because they are from him - says it all really Lydia.

love this line -
"kisses my mind with inspiration"

and I loved 'carnelian sunset' - another new word today - yehaa!

the final stanza is so filled with what it means to be not just the lover but also the friend, the confidant, the support that we all need.
excellent wordsmithing dear poet !

[Lydia Shutter]

So pleased I was able to introduce you to a new word, Anto. Thank you for telling me this and for the lovely review. Lydi**

[DIVYA]

Love gives life a whole new meaning and brushes it with amazing hues and colors. Reading this I felt uplifted and assured. Love never fails to create beauty and that beauty is so amazingly reflected in your words. Thank you for sharing.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Divya. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Sheila Kline]

Sigh, another Friday eve at hand and your words lead me into a land of romance and longing...oh, how lovely are your words! I appreciate the artwork you have chosen, the form of your creation and the beautiful ending - now, just where is that carnelian sunset??? LOL
A gem of a write!!!

[Lydia Shutter]

In my mind's eye, Sheila! :) Thank you so much for your lovely review. Lydi**

[Linda alexander]

the dandelions he picks
instantly become roses
hands me the carnelian sunset
he loves me
The changes happening so naturally when one person loves another is beautifully painted like the magical love itself, loved it

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Linda. Enjoy your weekend. Lydi**

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, enjoy your weekend too, am glad weather is better than few weeks prior

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are, and always will be, a poets poet, Lydi!
There is a delicacy to this...perhaps its the softness of the font that delivers each verse with a heightened feeling of euphoria. It's simply beautiful!


My best,
Kelly

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Kelly. You really started off my weekend with a smile. Lydi**

[stars are far]

that was very amazing work, i loved the last stanza the most and stating that he loves you.
that was wonderful lydia :)..

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much. Lydi**

[Tom]

Quite obviously a man with the midas touch and some....wonderfully romantic and superb timing for Friday evening !

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Tom. I always enjoy writing a "Friday night write". Hope to see your poetry again soon. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is fantastic, especially the last stanza...your brilliance shines as strong as the blush the color of the wine...and makes the reader feel a little light headed with the intensity of romance...

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Jacob. Your words mean a lot to me. Lydi**