Satin Satchel

Satin Satchel

A Poem by Lydia Shutter


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I stand close enough
zooming in on the brush strokes of your canvas
twisting the dials of emotion
in my psyche
so that every pore is in focus

Needing to
smoke you - - drink you - - have you
I cover my naked lust
with red silk
settling for a mental picture
to tuck seductively in
my satin satchel of memories

© 2015 Lydia Shutter


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I enjoyed this immensely. I am positive that this has been mentioned before, but "smoke you- drink you" is incredible. My god, if a women ever said that to me I would die and consider my life complete. I don't know why, maybe it's the love of language. My true love. My highest praise. CD

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Your review has started off my day with a shot of self confidence. Thank you so much, CD. Lydi**



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I enjoyed this immensely. I am positive that this has been mentioned before, but "smoke you- drink you" is incredible. My god, if a women ever said that to me I would die and consider my life complete. I don't know why, maybe it's the love of language. My true love. My highest praise. CD

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Your review has started off my day with a shot of self confidence. Thank you so much, CD. Lydi**
The flawless facets of this tiny gem simply sparkle!
Profoundly romantic; arousingly sensual.
Work to be admired, Lydi!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Frankie, you are good for my ego, my friend. Thank you so much. Lydi**
So sensual, sexy, romantic, and perfectly polished. Another lovely write. Thank you for making me remember why I come here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

You have made my day with all your reviews, KL. Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend. L.. read more
Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

It was my pleasure
Wow....steamy hot and sensual Lydi - your words sizzle upon the page. The longing, the ache ....I cover my lust with red silk... I am speechless. This is so, so great!!!

100/100 sensual love poems!

:) Julie

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Julie. Don't get that score often! Be well. Lydi**
Lydi... red silk in sensual folds
of desire to be an intimate part
of someone's gratification is a
theatrical embrace of romance.
truly seductive... Pat


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Pat. You are such a romantic. Lydi**
you might cover it with that red silk, but these words expose...

ah, that naked lust....such passion...

all your works have that passion...i am finding same in your wonderful book.

jacob

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Jacob, I am touched you purchased my book and honored you are enjoying it. Thank you very much for .. read more
"Needing to
smoke you -- drink you -- have you..."

Now, that's what I call an insatiable appetite! It has all the L's of a Lydia signature...lust, longing, and libido!



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

The BEST review EVER! The 3 L's......I will remember that! Thank you so much, Kelly. Have a great.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

8 Years Ago

...you as well, Lydi!
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Ahhh... I don' know what came first Lydi- the poem or the picture, but they compliment each other perfectly. The hushed secretive tone of the speaker in contrast with the loud colors is stunning. A satchel worth keeping. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

The words came first. I find the graphic after I write.....it is fun for me! :) Thank you so much.. read more
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8 Years Ago

A lovely keen eye you have Lydi!
Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
" ... smoke you - - drink you - - have you ...". Wowzers. Plenty of sultry, "hot" imagery all wrapped up in a satin satchel. This is a perfect offering for Friday Night Writes. Consider this a standing ovation. ~Jim

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Curtsying here! :) Thanks, Jim. Lydi**
I really enjoyed this poem. For some reason this is the type of poem i'm used to seeing behind a glass case

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Behind a glass case? Not sure what you mean, but I thank you for your review. Lydi**

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